Tuesday, 3 November 2015
REALLY ROUGH SCRIPT KIND OF
Screen - Nightmare -Sonny and the Kings
Ariel shot in bed
eyes open
HEY
side shot
turn over
feels like im asleep but im AWAKE
get out of bed on awake
eating cereal tv in the background of guitar
IN THIS DREAM I NEVER SEE YOUR FACE
into shot on tv
IM JUST A STEP BEHIND
zoom out onto office computer
office chair spin
hey
shot of still/ photograph- night time london
cant remember why you went away
cut to kitchen area making tea
pinch me cause i know its a mistake I wanna see your eyes. ZOOMING INTO EYES CLOSED
eyes open
I WOKE UP IN A-
still frame person
southbank at night
Generally taking in surroundings all happy and good.
where nothings really dangerous, everything is black and white and noone even know oh oh's
MOOD SWITCH
i woke up in a REALISES OTHER PERSON IS GONE wakes up in bed
broken dream
with noone lying
SHOT OF EMPTY BED
next to me.
flat on back ariel shot
its no how its supposed to be. So why'd you have to go 'oh 'oh (closer closer)
eyes snap open
Im still try-
NIGHTMARE SCENARIO ONE- slow mo
Running from shadows, broken leg, flowers in hand.
By the river where its like countryside.
implied danger.
blue light.
TRYING TO WAKE UP FROM THIS, FROM THIS NIGHTMARE, FROM THIS NIIIIIGHTMARE WHERE EVERY
fall down and crawl
DAY IS, IN ITS RIGHT PLACE BUT YOU'RE NOT THERE
*whirring sound effect*
tyler durden cut of photo subject there and gone
NO YOU'RE NOT THERE.
END OF SCENARIO 1
Closeup of face
Hey!
midshot at dinner table
tables set for two but its a waste
*gets up and leaves shot*
*ENTERS SHOT at sink/ bin cleaning plates*
food into bin ontop of newspaper
-local girl still missing-
im the only one thats breaking plates
the quiets getting loud
sitting down
turns on tv
shot of tv with cards near it
fake tv intro panel 'that 50's show'
hey everyone keeps saying im ok
one more night alone i'll go insane
i need to hold you now
I woke up in another life
HAMPTONS WITH SPARKLERS on bikes
where nothings really dangerous
and everything is black and white
and noone even knows
i woke up in a broken dream
SPARKLER DIES
with noone lying next to me
REALISES SHES ALONE
its not how its supposed to be
so why'd you have to go
LOOKING AROUND CONFUSED
IM STILL
HEADLIGHTS FLASH ON
TRYING
TO WAKE UP FROM THIS
CAR STARTS PERSUIT
EYES WIDEN
STARTS RUNNING
FROM THIS NIGHTMARE
RUNNING FROM VARIOUS ANGLES AND POSITIONS
FROM THIS NIGHTMARE WHERE EVERY DAY IS
IN ITS RIGHT PLACE
BUT YOURE NOT THERE
NO YOURE NOT THERE
RUN INTO FORREST - jarring sped up footage, play the song at half speed and then double footage
SMOKE BOMBS random articles of clothing on the ground
suddenly I can almost see it
feel the heat of your breath on my skin
scared to death that im only dreaming
synth whirring - sped up underpass
suddenly I can see you fading
holding on but my heart starts racing
scared to death cause I know i'm dreaming
OOOOOOOOHHHHH underpass
Im still trying..
FINAL THING
Nightmare scene one on the ground, noticing flowers in her hand
to wake up from this
confused
stands up from this
night
light comes on from behind
mare
turns around to face it
its the car
from this nightmare
confused
theres blood on the front
reaches out to touch it
when every
cut back to the forrest and the clothes
collecting clothes from the ground frantically
day is in its right place
zoom into face but youre
cut back to boat and sofa
sitting on the sofa with all the clothes
not there
gets up and picks up sympathy card from the sideboard
no youre not there.
tv flicks on
news footage
teenage girls body found in forest after being hit by a car
kneel down infront of the tv and touch the screen
intercut with megan in black in a cemetery holding the flowers from the earlier scene.
SPECIFICS
Outfits
Megan
in bed- pajamas
nightmare one- pajamas
office- office clothes
dinner- office clothes but ruffled/ hair down
nightmare 2 start- retro American themed clothes (find something)
nightmare 2- end- pajamas again
underpass- Grey. Grey is popular right now.
funeral- Black.
band scene- black leggings, black top, mask
Holly- cheap light clothes that can get covered in blood
PROPS
Smoke bombs
Sparklers
Car
Bikes
Flowers
Sympathy cards
Newspaper
News story for the TV
That 50's show poster
MUSIC VIDEO FOR TV+ office comp
I'm going to shoot in the Hamptons twice on the same day, with an interval in the middle. I want to film there during the daytime using the light to symbolise the happiness and safety felt by the protagonist. I then want to shoot when its a bit darker to represent the danger and fear in the nightmare.
I'm filming the funeral scene first so the flowers are still presentable.
I've divided my filming into two days, one where I need both Megan and Holly and one where I just need Megan. This is helpful because the filming is condensed so if I need to re-shoot something or film more, I'll know pretty early on.
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